It must come with the name.

Is your Heather a tall blonde by any chance? A rather good looking blonde?

Maybe we should compare them...see if both are one and the same... :p

Well this one is small and brunette but packs quite a punch. I believe she's beautiful. :D

Oh Yeah... New version: Fixed lots of stuff. My grammar might still suck though.

Don't get me started on small, beautiful, brunettes. There's a girl that I've known for just over a year now...who's in my year at school...no feeling as good as love.

Small, beautiful, brunette with the most amazing green eyes...

Nuts to the grammar As long as we can read it and interpret it properly then I think it's a success. Have you fixed the two chapter two's and "The driveway leads" bits?

Sorry, fell asleep Monday...

Now why did I not notice this yesterday...or this morning for that matter...

I see you've fixed "the driveway leads" and the 2 chapter 2's. Good good :)

Am I right in guessing you are going to carry it on as a full book? Or is it going to stop as the short story in the book you and your friends are writing?

Short story...

I can't stretch a story out... and this is only my second 2+ pg up story...

For some reason I keep on missing the new posts in this thread...and I don't know why.

What was your first attempt of writing a story? If you've still got it somewhere then I'd quite like to read it if possible.

Fat chance I'd find it... it sucks anyways...