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Some random female (Nudity)
Well, I've been spending a few days on and off to finally attempt modeling my first character ever, and this is what I have so far. Any feedback would, as always, be greatly appreciated. Oh, and some ideas for clothing wouldn't hurt too much either... :)
http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip...-483106_tn.jpg http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip...-483136_tn.jpg http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip...-483197_tn.jpg (Yes, silicone is easier to model) |
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that's some curved spline dude, and real smooth back :) |
Her ass is just a tad too big (or maybe it was the perspective). Either way, it looks cool so far. What other motions does she have, they are a little too restricting to have any decent ideas. Give her a tight black tank top and loose army cargo pants with military boots. She'll look like one bad ass motha!
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nah, chruser is not l33t enough for clothing yet ;)
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nice tits and body all around, the ass on one cheek looks a bit lumpy, and the face id have to say you should work more on... it looks good but for a female YOU create, you would want her to be the sexyest thing hehehe...
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chruser... why do you even bother getting criticisms here? so you can be praised? =\ :P i go to cgtalk for that! lol
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Maybe you've missed the fact that the program window is called "Modeler" meaning it's for modeling, not lighting? :rolleyes: |
its cool, they dont know that :P
Its looking pretty good atm. |
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looks very nice and the ass isn't that bad ...
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The problem I see myself is that the back of the pelvis bone doesn't stand out well enough. It looks like the area between the buttcheeks is connected with the actual spline, but that's an easy fix.
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I didnt even notice that
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i like the ass stop criticising it damnit!^_^
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neck's a little flat no?
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the stomach is flat above the belly button up to the breast.
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arms look a lil to fat (top view) Just my opinion...
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arms look a lil to fat (top view) Just in my opinion...
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:( ok randuin.... oh sry I did it again
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I don't know how long it has taken me, a couple of hours on and off over a week of spare time. 14 hours in total perhaps, I'm slow. :)
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Give us some follow-up on that. =)
And how much time did you spend on the latest article in Chruser's Corner? ^_^ |
About 12-15 minutes. :D
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Pretty good, I wish my comp was good enough to do that.
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i like it but im no critic of cg so good work chruser ^_^
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sir.dennis, your computer is better than a 500celeron with 64mb of ram? then you can do that
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Here's a test render for you:
http://www.zelaron.com/gear/Solset.jpg She's a bit cross-eyed, but that's a very easy change. Hair, a more natural-looking pose and even an environment is next. :) |
looks very nice. only the head looks freaky ^_^
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As I said, great job... good luck with finishing touches
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Looks pretty decent so far, I think the shape of the head is a little odd, and the arms taper from thick to thin too much also.
Otherwise, a fine progress. Cheers Craig -------------------------------------- Artist - Modeler Argonaut Sheffield www.f-nine.co.uk ------------------------------------- |
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Sure I'll hang out some on the forums :)
Cheers Craig |
mod him :P
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Fucked up ass -- sorry >_>
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Chop off her head and she=teh sexx0r.
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lol i remember when i made mod... it was fun
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you weren't even here so shut up :P
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