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Chruser 2003-05-09 06:45 AM
Some random female (Nudity)
 
Well, I've been spending a few days on and off to finally attempt modeling my first character ever, and this is what I have so far. Any feedback would, as always, be greatly appreciated. Oh, and some ideas for clothing wouldn't hurt too much either... :)

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip...-483106_tn.jpg

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip...-483136_tn.jpg

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip...-483197_tn.jpg

(Yes, silicone is easier to model)

Randuin 2003-05-09 07:42 AM
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that's some curved spline dude, and real smooth back :)

Titusfied 2003-05-09 07:44 AM
Her ass is just a tad too big (or maybe it was the perspective). Either way, it looks cool so far. What other motions does she have, they are a little too restricting to have any decent ideas. Give her a tight black tank top and loose army cargo pants with military boots. She'll look like one bad ass motha!

Randuin 2003-05-09 07:46 AM
nah, chruser is not l33t enough for clothing yet ;)

"CRØNîC-KîLLå" 2003-05-09 07:50 AM
nice tits and body all around, the ass on one cheek looks a bit lumpy, and the face id have to say you should work more on... it looks good but for a female YOU create, you would want her to be the sexyest thing hehehe...

Randuin 2003-05-09 08:53 AM
chruser... why do you even bother getting criticisms here? so you can be praised? =\ :P i go to cgtalk for that! lol

Shining Knights 2003-05-11 11:32 PM
It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

Chruser 2003-05-12 09:20 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Shinto Katana

Her ass in the back needs more shading, and it needs to be a bit smaller. The front needs to be bigger. Since she is in a slight drop/stance pose, though thats what I think. Also, is depends which way the light is hitting her, from the left the back ass would be lighter, and the front ass would be darker. From above, the side of the back ass would be darker, since the hands would hit it, and so on. Try to draw her on paper, look at the picture, and improve.
Uh, yeah...

Maybe you've missed the fact that the program window is called "Modeler" meaning it's for modeling, not lighting?

:rolleyes:

Acer 2003-05-12 12:30 PM
its cool, they dont know that :P

Its looking pretty good atm.

Shining Knights 2003-05-12 02:11 PM
It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

JiDDaR 2003-05-12 03:36 PM
looks very nice and the ass isn't that bad ...

Acer 2003-05-12 04:13 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by JiDDaR
looks very nice and the ass isn't that bad ...
I agree, I dont see the problem

Chruser 2003-05-12 04:17 PM
The problem I see myself is that the back of the pelvis bone doesn't stand out well enough. It looks like the area between the buttcheeks is connected with the actual spline, but that's an easy fix.

Acer 2003-05-12 05:13 PM
I didnt even notice that

natedowgg 2003-05-12 05:19 PM
i like the ass stop criticising it damnit!^_^

Randuin 2003-05-12 05:59 PM
neck's a little flat no?

Acer 2003-05-12 06:56 PM
the stomach is flat above the belly button up to the breast.

-Spector- 2003-05-12 07:21 PM
arms look a lil to fat (top view) Just my opinion...

-Spector- 2003-05-12 07:22 PM
arms look a lil to fat (top view) Just in my opinion...

JiDDaR 2003-05-13 11:40 PM
:( ok randuin.... oh sry I did it again


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