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Shining Knights 2004-01-27 12:22 PM
Dieing Love
 
It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

Dan XIII 2004-01-27 01:50 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Shinto Katana
Slowly bleeding to death--partner too, and the time counts down. You're lover is next to you, laying there. Blood pouring out. He looks over into your eyes--eyes are glistened, you can tell he's scared to die, he blinks once, and a tear falls, rolling down his cheek. With one last breath, "I love" You kiss your finger tips, and struggle your fingers across to his lips--gently fondling his lips. You breath deeply and say, "You." You're eyes water, and you gaze back into his. You rest your arm around his neck, and slowly die, looking into each others eyes...

© Christopher J. Hollingsworth
That is a pretty good poem.

Hades-Knight 2004-01-27 03:00 PM
that lookslike a poem written by mantralord.......


"HE" ?? are yout ryign to tell us something shinto?

Shining Knights 2004-01-27 07:39 PM
It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

vec 2004-02-02 08:09 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Shinto Katana
Slowly bleeding to death--partner too, and the time counts down. You're lover is next to you, laying there. Blood pouring out. He looks over into your eyes--eyes are glistened, you can tell he's scared to die, he blinks once, and a tear falls, rolling down his cheek. With one last breath, "I love" You kiss your finger tips, and struggle your fingers across to his lips--gently fondling his lips. You breath deeply and say, "You." You're eyes water, and you gaze back into his. You rest your arm around his neck, and slowly die, looking into each others eyes...

© Christopher J. Hollingsworth
it seems like it is the same thing as the other one you wrote a while back, but i do like this one the same. ^_^

Dan XIII 2004-02-03 07:17 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by vec
it seems like it is the same thing as the other one you wrote a while back, but i do like this one the same. ^_^
how long ago was the other poem written?

vec 2004-02-03 06:59 PM
http://zelaron.com/forum/showthread.php?t=23399

reminds me of that one.


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