Thread: Uhm...some writings from me
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Posted 2004-05-07, 06:09 AM in reply to vec's post starting "umm you could use stronger verbs, maybe..."
vec said:
umm you could use stronger verbs, maybe softer words(to show your care), and use a tone that fits your feelings... it just seems bland..
Ok...that's a good idea. I'm still inexperienced in descriptive writing... Thank you for your input
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