Alrighty, I'm gonna have to blow the whistle on this one, guys. I haven't read any of your stuff in depth, Kagom, mainly because I'm not too keen on guy/guy situations, but I just read over this last one, and you're about two steps away from erotic fanfiction.

Now, I'm not telling you what to write, and I'm not telling you that this last piece is breaking any sort of rules. What I am telling you is that you're getting dangerously close to erotic fiction, and that's not something I want posted in here. Just keep it in mind when you post future pieces. I can tolerate most of what you've posted so far. If I read anything about "throbbing meat-poles", it's getting deleted.