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Posted 2004-07-21, 01:00 AM in reply to MenstrualChunks's post starting "Sorry I was just kidding: to make up..."
really nice it flows great just at the end u need a better closing to make the reader wonder
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tokill.ace is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-betweentokill.ace is neither ape nor machine; has so far settled for the in-between
 
 
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