Bit of criticism:

The collar on the right for the male seems out of perspective or something. The angle just looks wrong.

The female's nose is too far to the left and possibly too big. The big factor could just be created by the left factor. She's just angled far enough to justify her nose being that close to her right eye (her right, not ours).

The B's not pronounced enough. It's kind of hazy.

And finally... does yours say Bladestar? Because Lenny's says Backstar.

What is it they say about silence being golden?