Don't get me started on small, beautiful, brunettes. There's a girl that I've known for just over a year now...who's in my year at school...no feeling as good as love.

Small, beautiful, brunette with the most amazing green eyes...

Nuts to the grammar As long as we can read it and interpret it properly then I think it's a success. Have you fixed the two chapter two's and "The driveway leads" bits?