Thread: My Objection to Religion
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Posted 2006-12-03, 06:23 PM in reply to KagomJack's post starting "Maybe simplify the language a little..."
KagomJack said:
Maybe simplify the language a little bit. Try to use more positive words instead of negative words. That's up to you, though. I thought it was fine the way it is, but I just thought I'd just offer up that since a friend of mine told me to suggest it.
Hmm...

Is the language difficult to follow? If so, could you or your friend suggest where I might simplify it?
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