This reminds me of a poem written by a bored, foul-minded 7th grader in his remedial english class. The topic is pre-pubescent at best, the wording is obtuse and vulgar and your use of the Caps Lock button is an eyesore. If you want to recieve some sort of praise for your work, try pulling your mind out of the vulgar doldrum it's currently mired in and try writing something with honest value or meaning. This is tripe, and no amount of constructive criticism is going to make it any better.