Love With A Whore

This reminds me of a poem written by a bored, foul-minded 7th grader in his remedial english class. The topic is pre-pubescent at best, the wording is obtuse and vulgar and your use of the Caps Lock button is an eyesore. If you want to recieve some sort of praise for your work, try pulling your mind out of the vulgar doldrum it's currently mired in and try writing something with honest value or meaning. This is tripe, and no amount of constructive criticism is going to make it any better.

I think that not only the subject is stupid and juvenile, but the poem's structure is pretty horrible too. There's nothing inspiring at all about the entire thing.

The literature forum was the only thing I could think of, besides the trashcan.

It certainly didn't belong in Forum Discussion.

It doesn't belong on this plane of existence. The Internet Gods need to banish it to Xanga, where that sort of idiocy is commonplace.

It wasn't my call.

Tis ur call now.