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Posted 2005-08-19, 05:37 AM in reply to Wed-G's post starting "Yeah... I know... I started school..."
School already?!

Sorry to hear that.

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I've finally come to parts that are new for me......



“Hey, can I hit that?” I ask point at her Dr. Pepper.

“Kill it.” She says tossing the bottle to me.

...tell a lie, what exactly is Lemon scene? I had never heard of it until I read this.

You've still got to explain how you hurt your leg:






The driveway leads




And Chapter 2 is repeated (you've got half of Chapter 2 before it starting again (Chapter 2 that is)).



I usually hate books written about real life etc...and ones in 1st person (picky little sod...) but this is one that I'd definitely buy if you succeed in getting it published.

One thing I keep on taking for granted is how over here we're legally allowed to drink at 18. Which usually means if you drive, then you can drink as well. Yet you guys (or at least the majority of you. It is 18 in a few states isn't it?) can't drink legally until 21.

Out of interest, at what age can you guys learn to drive as well? Is it 17?


A great read. Keep it up Wed!!

Last edited by Lenny; 2005-08-19 at 06:12 AM.
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