Of all my Friends

School already?!

Sorry to hear that.

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I've finally come to parts that are new for me......

“Hey, can I hit that?” I ask point at her Dr. Pepper.

“Kill it.” She says tossing the bottle to me.

...tell a lie, what exactly is Lemon scene? I had never heard of it until I read this.

You've still got to explain how you hurt your leg:

The driveway leads

And Chapter 2 is repeated (you've got half of Chapter 2 before it starting again (Chapter 2 that is)).



I usually hate books written about real life etc...and ones in 1st person (picky little sod...) but this is one that I'd definitely buy if you succeed in getting it published.

One thing I keep on taking for granted is how over here we're legally allowed to drink at 18. Which usually means if you drive, then you can drink as well. Yet you guys (or at least the majority of you. It is 18 in a few states isn't it?) can't drink legally until 21.

Out of interest, at what age can you guys learn to drive as well? Is it 17?


A great read. Keep it up Wed!!

Well, I've already got a guarantee that it be published. Xerox.com will publish books by how many copies you want. If you order like 10 copies(it's cheap) then they will print you 10 books and send them to you.

Driving, you can learn to drive at 15. You get your license after I think a year of practice. They passed a law where any born in 1990 and up can't get a license till your 18.

You can't drink unless you 21 in any state.

I'd swear I fixed the driveway part.

2 chapter 2's?!?!?!? I'll look into it and update today or tomorrow.

A quick explaination of how he hurt his leg is he tripped on the driveway over a log CAUSE IT WAS FREAKIN DARK! The log kinda stuck into his leg.

Thanks Penguin.

Oh and my friends write Lemon Scenes which are like fan-fics or made-up stories from some anime or video game that was rewritten as sexually explicit material.

Non-Con: Noconsensual
Orange Scene: Masturbation scene
and others... I'll get "Lemon" to tell me.

Driving, you can learn to drive at 15. You get your license after I think a year of practice.

Crazy?!

They passed a law where any born in 1990 and up can't get a license till your 18.

Sanity! Thank the Gods!



That seems rather crazy...letting people drive at 15. So you can drive before you can legally have sex and drink.

You can't drink unless you 21 in any state.

You poor things! I've been told I'm most likely gonna end up as an alcoholic...so by the time you guys can drink, I'll be in rehab...

You must've gone to fix the driveway part, become sidetracked and start thinking you'd done it.

And yes, two Chapter 2's. The first starts on page 20 and stops on 21. The second is from 22 to 33.

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So Xerox.com publish eh...hmmm...

You'll have to see if you can get a bookshop to sell your book. Then ask others in the area etc. and build it up. Then ask the bookshops in the shopping arcades and so on. Maybe get a chain of shops selling them.

When it finally comes over to England you'll have to write a special introduction (or bit at the end) explaining everything...

Try contacting a Literary Agent as well and seeing if they'll get the book published. Don't go for the one though, ask a few agents. Google "literary agent + {your state/area}" and see what their tersm are.

well, I did fix it. I had BIG problems getting it from one computer to this one.

I had to use and old chapter 1 and the new chapter 2(hence the f'ed up ness.)

The book has now become a short story to be ending soon. It is now part of a collection of short stories and poems written by me and a few friends.

It's now called the "Book of Closed Doors"

It will include(Grammarly intact) stories that no one wants to read or hear about. Uncomfortable things like Rape and parental fighting stuff. It will be and inspiration book by fictional example's of strength.

I'm not sure you would like the morals because of the fact it teaches strength through religion.

Which, by the way, have you read any of the bible? If not start on Psalms. Please! I'm very open with other religions such as Wicca and Atheism, but Scientology is just ridiculous. Aliens?

But enough religion bashing.

I'm not sure you would like the morals because of the fact it teaches strength through religion.

I'll still end up reading it, but I'll probably end up not taking much notice of anything trying to be religious.

And no, I haven't read any of the Bible yet...though I'm still meaning to read Revelations as you told me to do.

Even though it is going to be a short story carry it on as if it were a full-length book. In "Book of Closed Doors" could be an extract or something that is like a short story within the whole of "Of All my Friends". Maybe Eadi's atempted suicide up to the bit (I'm only guessing that this is going to happen) when she and Jason get together (does that end up happening?).

As for Scientology and Aliens...I'm not a great one for Aliens either, but for Science I'm a sucker...

but for Science I'm a sucker...

There is nothing wrong with science. I'm quite the nerd too.

But if you truly notice the beauty of nature and the patterns throughout everything, life CAN'T be just a random unthoughtout thing.

But, if you're thinking I'm just one of those hypocritical Christians, think again. I truly care what happens to my friends and you, Lenny, are my friend.

If you truly don't believe thier is a God and that we will all rot in the ground forever, believing in God couldn't hurt. Because if I'm wrong and you're right and we do spend eternity not existing anymore what have you got to lose?

But, if you're thinking I'm just one of those hypocritical Christians, think again.

The thought didn't even begin to cross my mind. There's no reason nor evidence to show that you are.

I don't see how a supernatural being such as God could exist, there's no scientific explanation for it, and so I don't believe. There are also scientific explanations for things that happen in the Bible, which I prefer to believe. Everyone has a right to their own opinions.

But if you truly notice the beauty of nature and the patterns throughout everything, life CAN'T be just a random un-thought-out thing.

I recognise this argument! Years of doing RS finally pays off...this is the...oh I can't remember! There are the 4 main arguments for God's existence and this is one of them. It's all in my RS book somewhere, a book which I've lost, as well as research I did against the argument.

What are they...there's the Cosmological, Teleological, Design argument and the _________ argument.

I truly care what happens to my friends and you, Lenny, are my friend.

We're both quite similar here, yet the differences are quite major. I guess that you care for them as a Christian as well as a friend?


Anywho...

There is nothing wrong with science. I'm quite the nerd too.

Science and Religion seem to go together quite well. Some of the best Scientists have been deeply religious.