Thread: All Mamals flirt
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Posted 2009-08-08, 01:11 PM in reply to Mdselctr's post starting "If you intend to construct a commencing..."
Mdselctr said: [Goto]
If you intend to construct a commencing series, at least
use a coordinating conjunction in your last member; or,
the last member of the series should lead to a climax.
Unfortunately, the fact that humans do 'it' (who's ante-
cedent is 'all mammals flirt') leaves the reader expect-
ing more. Therefore, your sentence has a comical affect
that makes one wonder if the outcome was intended. A more
definite sentence would follow the law of parallelism.

This is a very informative and in-depth paper on mammal farts. You should publish it to the scientific community.
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