All Mamals flirt

Lobsters do it, dogs do it, humans do it...

If you intend to construct a commencing series, at least
use a coordinating conjunction in your last member; or,
the last member of the series should lead to a climax.
Unfortunately, the fact that humans do 'it' (who's ante-
cedent is 'all mammals flirt') leaves the reader expect-
ing more. Therefore, your sentence has a comical affect
that makes one wonder if the outcome was intended. A more
definite sentence would follow the law of parallelism.

If you intend to construct a commencing series, at least use a coordinating conjunction in your last member; or, the last member of the series should lead to a climax. Unfortunately, the fact that humans do 'it' (who's ante- cedent is 'all mammals flirt') leaves the reader expect- ing more. Therefore, your sentence has a comical affect that makes one wonder if the outcome was intended. A more definite sentence would follow the law of parallelism.

This is a very informative and in-depth paper on mammal farts. You should publish it to the scientific community.

This is a very informative and in-depth paper on mammal farts. You should publish it to the scientific community.

But it is not on topic; in fact, it
is a response to grammatical errors.

But it is not on topic; in fact, it is a response to grammatical errors.

Are you implying my grammer has errors?