I think you should maybe hire someone just for the names...
...no???
I've typed up the little scene where the hero and the girl meet the guy you drew...they meet him on the outskirts of the town; the hero is pulling the girl along behind him trying to get away from the town quickly - don't know why yet - and so the come to a crossroads. They don't know which way to go, so the hero just pulls her down one road...a bit further down the road they take is a big rock, the guy you drew is sat on the side that the hero can't see so he doesn't notice him as he rushes past. The guy on the rock sees the hero pulling along a girl, thinks he's doing it against her will, so shouts at him "What are you doing?" etc etc. Big fight follows, guy beaten literally trodden in mud. After some thought follows them, wanting to join team. Few days later he finds them in a clearing and presents his service to them.
I'll upload it later, when my floppy disc drive begins to work again...
...thing is, I've written a lot before it, amd a bit after it, so I'm afraid you're gonna have to scan through it..
Also, I've made up my own colours of the guys clothing etc. for the moment...I'll change 'em when I see the colour version...
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My bad about the name, just found where we decided the name:
First page of this thread...
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