sitting and thinking

I like the imagery. I have one suggestion for you, though:

Try making the references to the subject more vague. You're drawing a parallel between the environment around you and (I assume) a girl. Lines like "each ripple, your silkened touch" seem to me like they would be more effective if you just simply said "each ripple, a silkened touch" or "that silkened touch." Another example: "Trees whisper your name." Maybe change it to "Trees whsiper a name." Make it more ambigous than you already have, and I think you've got a winner.