Dumb ass Poem.

It doesn't give you permission to flame me outside the FF. I said it's a dumbass poem, Not I'm a dumbass.

And I never said you were a dumbass. Point being what?

I'm a dumbass.

Right there you did.

The poem is....well, no negative comments. Bah.

He flamed himself with his title, what did he expect?

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Point being you are NOT Allowed to flame outside the Flame Forum.

The ban of Grav is what I yearn
If only the world would turn
The slaying of Slim would be so great
If only the world would turn
Slaynish slaughtered, cow style
If only the world would turn
I can't be a part of this proximity
Why won't the world, turn for me?

Well, since you seem to want me dead so much why not come find me? I'll be waiting for you, e-thug.

Slim if you have nothing constructive to say, please do not spam my thread.

Knock it off with the flames, guys. Seriously, I don't understand what's so fucking hard about that.

The ban of Grav is what I yearn If only the world would turn The slaying of Slim would be so great If only the world would turn Slaynish slaughtered, cow style If only the world would turn I can't be a part of this proximity Why won't the world, turn for me?

"I can't be a part of this closeness"

That just doesn't work. The world DOES turn, so your B lines aren't really making sense either. the last line should really be "If only the world would turn.. for me.."