Jess's return to the Literature Forum.

Fair point. I ought to gawk at bit more myself then.

If you made the beginning too wordy then you could pass it off as more than a beginning. Take some kind of event from the end or whatever, make it into a Prologue, stick in the very wordy ex-beginning, and carry on with what you do best. Sor'ed, innit?

Hint: Dream. Detailed for a reason.

Ah, I'm starting to get a picture now.

Time for a famous Guess a la Lenny. She waks up and the story begins? The scene in her dream is vital for the rest of the story as it is a prophecy of sorts? She ends up waking up in that place as her dream details?

And may I ask, is she a tribe member? Just a little thought...thinking maybe she's part of a Nomadic/tribe.

Nein. Way off. You shall see.

OK.

Wait I shall.

You'll have to divulge some plot details soon. A book is to be read as a whole, not in single paragraphs without knowing what happens.

Yes well...I'm evil.

...and lazy.

At least a lazy person can be lazy on a computer all day.

Better than working your little cotton socks off and not having the time or energy to press a little on button.