K since I dont have a scanner and my tablet is broken I needed a way to digitalize my drawings so I came up with an idea, its rather time consuming but it gets the job done
First I took my camera, made a picture of my drawing, put it into the computer and used photoshop to redraw it with my mouse :S.
The elbow height of the arm is a bit too high. It should be a bit further down by the waist.
The horns look a bit dettached from the head.
The tail angle looks a bit off, I can't really put my finger on why. It somehow almost looks attached partially sideways.
Too much identical lineweight in the coloured piece.
Odd ambient lighting effect. The shadows don't look prominent enough. I'd suggest some high-chroma highlights.
The pose looks stiff and somewhat uninteresting.
Keep up the good work!
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Ah thx for the c&c thats really helpfull, I know the lineweight is too identical, because I dont have tablet and so I decided to make it more ''cartoony''. Also I'm still trying to get the hang of coloring and shading, never actually coloured stuff, all I really did was drawing lineart.