Game Development Team (Thread 2)

Gah, stupid school blocking geocities. Wait til i get home to see it.

I don't think Aurv. minds if I picture link it...here it is:

Ok finally finished

Bit of criticism:

The collar on the right for the male seems out of perspective or something. The angle just looks wrong.

The female's nose is too far to the left and possibly too big. The big factor could just be created by the left factor. She's just angled far enough to justify her nose being that close to her right eye (her right, not ours).

The B's not pronounced enough. It's kind of hazy.

And finally... does yours say Bladestar? Because Lenny's says Backstar.

Bit of criticism: The collar on the right for the male seems out of perspective or something. The angle just looks wrong. The female's nose is too far to the left and possibly too big. The big factor could just be created by the left factor. She's just angled far enough to justify her nose being that close to her right eye (her right, not ours). The B's not pronounced enough. It's kind of hazy. And finally... does yours say Bladestar? Because Lenny's says Backstar.

i know back star is the old one I was soppose to change it to bladestar
most of the prob is because im at school and they have fireworks and im not that good at using fireworks

Good good. Btw, don't take any criticism on my part as anything but constructive. I can't draw for shit, and I wish I could. Just pointing out what would make it better.